Here i am so far awayLike you wanted me to be
But its not the same
As you may never know
I lay in bed, counting my tears,
Each representing what I'd hoped would be years.
Years of happiness, for us to be together,
A long-lived life, forever and ever
But in my heart, I know this will never be,
For in yours, no longer is there a place for me
I gave you my all; I gave you my heart,
Little did I know that you'd tear it apart
But starting from today
I will cry no more
Your love slowly leaving into a silent death
Gradually learning to live in my own pair of shoes
14 comments:
hei grl ....how come, ur just getting my words,
this is not fair .. hehe..:P
i know life is different for diff ppl. but ur just expressing things inside me.. i know it cant be ..
what i wanna say is this is so related to my life .. at least these days...
Keep up the work grl.
ohhh a nice one...i luuurv it:)
heyyyyyyy same happenin here... salhi varah
*speechless*
nicely written... luv it :)
very umm wats the word for it..poetic.. :)
did you write it? i'm not really into poems and stuff lyk that but i still think its nice =)
kewl poem.. b brave girl. n kyp smilling.
kwlio poem... asluves v thihthi.. ^.^
sad, yet a lovely poem...*speechless*
yea thanx all.. sometimes u need to be brave dho and live life your own ways.. and learn to let go..
i gues we all go through this at one point in our lives. better to move on than dwell in those memories. a relationship wont ever work unless BOTH of you want it to work and unless BOTH of you put in the needed effort. so jes tell yourself that he didnt love you or wanted you as much as u did. so better move on from that abyss and look for better things in life. there's countless more people to meet. and there's definitely someone out there more deserving of receiving your all once again when the circumstances are right. cheer up ;) life still goes on
Well i can relate to wat you feel...i was where you were about a year or so...but as the saying goes...komme kameh ves vaane emme rangalhah..u might not want to believe in it...but u will...there is always a rainbow after the rain you just have to wait and look for it patiently =)
My goodness.. So nicely expressed feelings. This can't be a lie. But I hope it's not real and just a poem.
Keep writing.. You're very clever.
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